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The Dark Angel's Lament by ~rheherem:iconrheherem:



The Dark Angel’s Lament

Wings of shadow, heart of shame
A man imprisoned by his pain
Chains of metal, chains of mind
Tied to the one he left behind
A corner of a dungeon, a palace in the sky
All are a prison to a tortured life
His shackles are something no one should bear
He knows his worries and his cares
But his ghosts will never let him be
‘Til all he sees is misery
Just like a fable of long lost love
No stars shine in his heaven above
But his story is true, and forever is eternity
His pain condemned him to this end
But the end is something he’ll never see
Once he flew the skies with pride, living the life of royalty
Now he walks the empty world alone, haunted by his memories
He doesn’t know where he went wrong, only now nothing’s right
The blood-red sun on a broken soul casts only a dead light
©2007-2009 ~rheherem
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Submitted: November 28, 2007
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I wrote this about someone I know. I know it's not great, but it's the best I could do in one day.
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Wow, and you worship me? Why? I worship you :)

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"Guys wearing eyeliner turn me on."
A beautiful piece of work, morbid, sad, and very rythmic. Sadly underrated though. :)

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Good thing that there is art and literature. It's not giving me hope for the future, but at least it takes my mind away from the hate-infested heap of mindless meatbags that is commonly known as the world's population.
thank you! i can't beleive an author like you is praising my work! :party:

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It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are ignorant, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.
I agree with every word Tar said. :)

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Stay Alive!

Don't be ashamed of who you are, be ashamed of who I am instead.

"Not that I detest extraterrestrials but I believe it is much easier to socialize with the population of Earth."
thank you!!!

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It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are ignorant, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.
Tar's right, great rhythm. My favorite line is the very last one.

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I like this thing I am, Come on I'll kill you.
thanks. that means a lot to me.

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It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are ignorant, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.
I agree, we are all prisoners in one aspect in another. And yet of how I feel about this poem, we are all tortured in some way. And we can only hope to get out, and the sad part is we forget how we got there.

Excellent piece of art. =)

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"We die for the cause, to live for the suffering.."
thank you so much. actually, i wrote this abot someone i know. it describes their life. one of the few pieces where i feel i captured the feeling right.

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It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are ignorant, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.

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